When It Rains

we stand here

 

together

 

in the rain

 

you holding me tight

 

 

why is it

 

that you only show

 

when it rains?

 

 

we stand here

 

you holding me

 

your feathered wings

 

getting wet

 

 

you say

 

you will never leave me

 

but i know

 

when the rain stops

you'll go 

Reviews

[jess]

i agree with Aaron Maycroft. "raining emotions of life" defiently. (definetly) i liked it.

[Wolfwind Words]

I love this one! The image of an angel that opens up like an umbrella sheltering one from the raining emotions of life!

Angels to me are like one's "Balance" it's only there when you need it.

I enjoy how you easily weave your words into simple to understand visuals, that project cleanly onto the screens of the reader!

Another Great Poem!
Infinity's Shadow