All When The Rain Falls

Hmm. For my Grandmother.

its raining

and not just outside...

when i look in the mirror

theres a glimmer in my eyes

where are you when i need you

cause your not here...

i stare to long

and down rolls a tear...

its been almost a year

but it feels like forever

and theres still a scar

in my heart

where you were so alive...

but then you left me

here without you...

im still tryin to make it

but its still too soon... 

Author's Note

i hope you like it....it was from the deepest part of my heart...

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece .. i'm in an emotional mood right now anyway so this hit even harder ... nice job... thanks for sharing.

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

I can relate to this wholeheartedly. Through this poem you were able to describe not only your feelings about the loss of your grandmother, but you pinned down my own. You present your emotions well. Great job with this!