Let Me In

Hmmm. I was on a vampire rant for awhile.

i dream of you

welcoming me into

your undead heart

 

i try and i try

to pry my way in

but i fail over and over again

 

you know that i love you

that you can not show

but for that i would pay every toll

 

as my heart still beats

with your loves control

i all but wish

that you would give me your all

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Awesome! My favorite part was the first stanza.' i dream of you

welcoming me into

your undead heart"
Very nice, perfect opening. :D

[Amy]

I loved this one,
so well written,
and carefully thought out! x