Love's Unconditional

Nothing I say is ever deep enough for the way I feel about you.

You leave me truly breathless.

You're gorgeous in everything you do.

You make me smile like the sunshine never can and,

I'm so in love with you.

The blue birds in the snow covered trees do not fill me with the happiness

that you do.

Your breathless words in my neck fill me with a warmth 

that this bed never can.

You are the part of me that burns the brightest,

and it shall never fade,

as long as the match stays to the candle.

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I agree with darkdragonchick -- this poem has wonderful imagry. The love for this person is very evident in each line and stanza. It reminds me of the feelings I have for my love :)
Great job.

[Sarah Hale]

^^ Very nice love the imagery...