The Accident

This never happened to me but many people are victims of drunk drivers everyday. Save lives. Don't drink and drive.

You promised me safety.
You promised me care.

Now I'm fading fast.
And I don't know where.

Hazy I see crimson
leaking on leather.

It wasn't supposed
to be this way ever.

Pain pricks my spine
and shoots to my head.

The sight I see
quick fills me with dread.

I see you lay still
on the red grass.

Sirens get loud
and arrive in big mass.

This wasn't your fault.
I know this is true.

Come back to me.
I really need you.

He should have stayed home.
The driver was drunk.

You would still be here
if he would have thunk.

I miss you forever
and I'll never forget.

The day that you
and lord Jesus had met.

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

Wow, uhm just saying my 16 year old Brother Died in 2010. Day before my birthday Because Drinking and driving...its horrible stuff well I cried. Nice write. tho

[AnonymousWriterToYou]

Wow, can I just say that you're poetry tells a story to me? Wait, I think I have! Well, I seriously think i'm your biggest fan! Keep writing! And don't ever stop at what you do, you could make big money one day!!!!!!!!!

[sHear]

Always get envious of people who can write so easily about things this tangible. Not a whole lot of wiggle room for something so real. Nice job.