My Dirty Little Secret

I have a dirty little secret
that no one but you knows.
That's because I trust you
from your head to your toes.

I have a dirty little secret
in the back of my mind.
It's lurking in the shadows
of my brain all the time.

And when I tell my secret
to you and only you,
you smile and laugh and think it's cute.
That it's crazy and it's new.

You promise to keep it hidden
from the evils of this place.
You promise because if they knew,
I couldn't show my face.

I have a dirty little secret
and with it in you I trust.
Because with out having trust in you
It's not love. It's just lust.

Reviews

[October Oblivion]

This....is....amazing...*smiles* It properly devotes the emotions given to the sacred altar of teenage love (although in most cases it's just, as you said, lust)...but within this devotion brings it out of mere infatuation, grinning upon the world in ecstasy with actual love. So, this dirty little secret...has been well worth the whiule to read. :)

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship P..]

Hm. Still needs some editing. :) But I love the plot and the writer. :D

First, in stanza one (1) I have a dirty little secret
that no one but you knows.
That's because (i) trust you
from your head to your toes. (The 'i" needs to be capitalized)
Last stanza last sentience it's not love. It's just lust. (though you didn't end the last line with an ending mark, I'm guessing it was the end of that completed though, so therefor I ask you to please put an ending mark, and change the 'it's" to "It's" if that is what you meant.

:) But over-all. You're poem is just so cute!
~S. D. Blankenship

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Wow!

[Luciole]

This is really amazing. You really gave a strong message.

[BikerAngie]

Excellent write young lady!

[IrishSaint0771]

I'll always will keep it :)

[quixotic_rose]

I like this a lot :). it shows how much trust you can give a person, and then they have the power to destroy you, but its not just anyone your telling the secret to; its someone you love and with love usually theres trust. very nice :)