Measuring Love

Wrote this for a contest. The poem should have 4 lines and should rhyme. Anyway, this was fun to write. ;)

Measuring Love

Kiss me, touch me, love me, just please captivate me,

With that sweet smile of yours, I’ll be your one and only devotee.

I don’t give a damn if one day you’ll let me go and set our love free,

I’d still do anything for you, my love, even parting the red sea.

Author's Note

Wrote this in just a few minutes, but I still hope you like this. Just a light read with not much depth into it. HAHA =))

Awarded 'second' in the Four Lines. Make it Rhyme. Contest

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I love short poems and yours is extremely
lovable.
Perhaps your dedication to love is the
captivating essence. You leave no doubt
pf your intentions.
Great write, great loving, great talent.
Thanks for letting me read you--- it sounds
like a little read is it, all the rest belongs to
your love.

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Manpreet]

A cute write.

[Me]

Simply beautiful, you are a talented poet.

[Entrelesnuages]

Short but distilled. This is very nice. I love the phrase "captivate me".

[No name]

Short poems can sometimes be the poems that have the strongest meanings and full of great emotions. I really like this poem, it was very sweet and you could sense love when reading it. I like the format and the flow. Great write.

[Nao Deguchi]

There is no measuring how much it will leave you and haunt you, at least you sound care-free.

[frozensakura]

i love short simple poems. this is a sweet poem, no wonder it was a contest winner. -chole(:

[pamzilla. &hear..]

I think this is one of my most favourite poems from you .
It's short, sweet and pretty incredible .
Like a Hershey's Kiss .
♥

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i really like this piece...sometimes the short little poems are the ones that really speak...still very cute, very sweet, and great write...

[emma]

loved it! it was short and cute and perfect! the last line was my favourite;)