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Reviews

[J.Michele]

Oh My God! You say so much in so few words. I can not stop reading this :) You have a gift my friend.

[hannah y.]

thank you so much!! ^^ it really means a lot to me ;v;

[J.Michele]

All good :D I'm reading your writing at the moment and seriously the amount of depth and emotion you put into a few simple words is mind blowing.

[hannah y.]

honestly, if you saw my drafts and my old poetry you would take that back :P i really appreciate the kind words, though! c:

[J.Michele]

It's okay, as they say practise makes perfect :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I do understand the words. Some people can make us fearful. Sometime hope is more scary than negative place and thoughts. I liked the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hannah y.]

yes, i agree completely! thank you so much for the review! c:

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[misterfebus]

Thanks for your thoughts on Oranges. I just read a few of yours and this one
I feel familiar with the most - I'm an introvert, so the line: "but when our eyes meet"
- I usually freeze and instead of something to see; for me its "something to say."
And have you ever heard the song? - "love is like oxygen" search for it. I also liked
"only your touch can fix my skeleton" - its different from the constant skin touching.

[hannah y.]

hello! ^^ oranges was a lovely read!

i understand what you mean about something to say! often times i want to say something but in the end i just can't seem to say the words, so i'm glad you understand how that feels (not that it's a good thing to feel, haha, but it's nice to be understood)

in this poem i was trying to talk about how sometimes you feel like you need and rely on somebody, but they don't need you, so the character is afraid to realize that the person she cares so much about doesn't need her at all ^^ i hope that makes sense!

thank you for your comments!