Does he make me suffer?

A story about a girl I know who keeps loosing her path and she's becomming more blinder because she can't see the light that's right in front of her.

Why is this my path?

Why is the path of pain and hopelessness

my path?

Was this chosen for me?

In a life before this,

Did I do wrong?

Does he want to make me suffer?

I hear,

In church

That he loves and knows

Every single hair on my head,

I started to think otherwise for a while.

I found him again,

He's new and gentle

He saw my suffering

and he healed me.

Reviews

[RobbyKube]

Nice poem. And thanks for the link. I liked the song. First time I listen to that group, but probably not the last

[snopadelic]

Thaats a interesting poem. Poetry not really my thing but i liked the short structure of the writing. I like it