Day to Day

It's like one day

You've got a friend

And the next day

That's the end

 

Like one day

You're just a f**k

And the next day

You're out of luck

 

Like one day

You give it a try

And the next day

You lay down and cry

 

Like one day

You're sad and alone

And the next

No one bother's to pick up the phone

 

Like one day

You just end it and die

And the next day

Everyone's wondering why...

Reviews

[Michael X]

I believe the word choice sincerely accentuated the powerful effect this piece has to offer, its raw and flows with a sense of conviction,I'm sure many people can relate one way or another, great poem.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Whoa! That last stanza really took it up a notch! I understand the feelings you gave here!
This really sounds like teenage angst and you capture it well. Very beautifully written; great
flow and description.......