Battlefeild

On the battlefeild we stand

Hand in hand

Heart to heart.

I was never told I would have to go through this part.

My breath is caught

I don't want to fight

but I know that your right.

Theres no chance we'll win.

But the victory is ours.

For I did not ask to win

Nor did I ask to loose.

I asked to be here.

and Die with you.

Reviews

[Melbell19]

Thank you for the submission and this piece is definatly being considered as a finalist.
I just have a quick question,
Did you mean to misspell "battlefield" or is it a typo?
Thank you!

[An owl on the moon]

You express such a powerful commitment that is so clearly seen in the imagery of the battlefield. Together, the sense of destiny to be one no matter what happens. Beautifully spoken!