I am not forgiven

As death begins to take my life away

My memories are truly a fray.

Of what my life used to be.

And way beyond what you will see.

I miss the sunsets so rasberry, lemon.

I know I am not forgiven.

I was stuck in a clouded fog.

So hard to see, I'm just not here.

Fading away stuck in forever.

Will you hear the screams I cry.

The times I've lied.

I lie too much for you to know.

I cry so much it breaks my soul.

I am not forgiven for what I have done.

I am not seen, nor heard.

As the whisper of words.

Spread over seas of agony.

And screams only to frighten me.

I am not me.

I never will be.

So for that I have found a different path.

A path you do not like.

A path that is away from the light.

I know this choice is wrong.

Just remeber.

I don't exspect to be forgiven.

Reviews

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

I'm gonna cry!! >.< It's really good though...

[An owl on the moon]

So darkly somber, yet expressed tenderly and deeply. Your writing is emotionally gripping and moving. This is an amazing write that I can both see and feel.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The depth of sorrow in this piece is gut wrenching... it is easier to forgive another then it is ourselves when we error for it lives in our memories and nips at us when we start to feel good to remind us we are not perfect... very powerful and moving write.

[bluessadmood]

This was nice,how you write with much feelings,every words like shouting..
As death comes near,memories are like a fray of what life used to be
things you will never see,I will miss those sunsets,how i know i am not forgiven
Stuck in clouded fog,so hard to see,I am just not here,I fade stuck in forever
And I cry and scream,I ve always lied,want to cry to break my soul
I am not seen ,nor heard as words spread over seas of agony
I have found me a new path away from light,will never be forgiven
That was so nice and lovely..so much emotions,heart breaking
lovely write..