when oceans sink

oh I sat alone
asleep at home
I heard you voice a sound
I woke up to see
you leaving me
I asked, is there something wrong?

let me know
let me know
please let me know
let me know

as you left I screamed
and cried your name
but you never turned around
I sank to my knees
my hands to my feet
with my tears I think I drowned

let me know
let me know
please let me know
let me know

when I died you came
to visit me
flowers in your palms
it was then you knew
I did love you
teary eyed
you ran away

let me know
let me know
please let me know
let me know

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

It is an evil thing that comes to women in the middle of the night makes us run.. compels us to.. I know because I have done it.. I know because my friends do it..I know because men .. tell me they have had it happen to them.. they why ..is something women can never truly tell...because most don't know that it is a brain thing ..half asleep.. dream thoughts..always seem intense..anyhow.. this poem made me think ..yes . if someone dies , suddenly.. we are filled with relization of our love for them.. but now is the only time for love to be used .

[Nae Nae]

Harsh reality, yet cruel fantasy? Either way this is beautiful, again I read something I was not expecting.

Loved it!

Nae-Nae ...

[A]

WOW...so sad but a great poem! I can see this being a song. Very well written and I love the word flow! :)