Can you?

Most connections between people are not what it should be, no matter if it's a friendship or a relationship. It's questioning the connection itself.

Can you feel the way?

The way I do, the way I think?

The way I feel, the way I drink?

Can you see what’s there?

what’s there I did, what’s there I thought?

what’s there I saw, what’s there I fought?

Can you hear?

How I wanted to stay?

How my soul was bare?

Through one blink you caught?

Can you?

Reviews

[SheenLeigh]

Now this is a poetry that makes me really, wan't to say I CAN. I hope I can write like you , such a beautiful poem.

[Patricia]

Oh my, This is an enormous compliment to me, but please don't ha ha i think poetry needs individuality. But thank you so much anyways

[Patricia]

Thank you for your loving rewiews, i really appriciate that!!

[ANM]

Do we ever really know someone... Powerful writing!

[Patricia]

Maybe, i think it depends on the relashion between two people and how much a person is willing to share

[Rene Salinas]

This writing gives the word rhetorical a center stage. The way I felt it it needs not to be pondered and answered as every question is a reflection of a moment and that moment is presented in a wondorous form rather han a linear sequence or a rhymical narrative.

Anyhow Can I? No I can't sorry.

Thankyou

[Patricia]

I never would've thought about someone thinking about my poetry, this is so great to hear thank you!

[Ramiz Ilham Khan]

Through one blink you caught? - Beautiful line.

[Patricia]

Thank you very much, I had never thought that people would like this so much!

[Angad Waraich]

A deep original piece.
The second last line was wonderfully presented.
I mean i just loved it.
Well done.
Enjoyed the poem.
Thank you for sharing.

[Patricia]

Thank you for rading and reviewing:)! This is so lovely to hear

[Angad Waraich]

You're most welcome!

[Wórdsmíth]

I admire the line: "Through one blink you caught?" Quiet impressive! I love how you write poetry`s. Your poems`re very good as well as full of the depth of insights. Glad to read you work!

[Patricia]

Thank you so much, I had never thought that this line would be so liked ha ha

[Wórdsmíth]

You make me *chuckle* ;)

[MomzillaNC]

Powerful and moving lines. We all want understanding and to make that connection soul to soul. And, we always wonder if the other person is capable of those connections or even aware of the need in us while they're answering then need in themselves.

[Patricia]

thanks for reading! I'm so pleased you carried on my thoughts

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.