In a heartbeat

Hard time to express

I cannot believe

Everything I feel

What happened so fast

It doesn't seem real

I cannot speak

Don't let me drown

Please say something

Don't let me down

I need to hear

It will be okay

Your heart throbs, too

And that you'll stay

Our hearts in one rhythm

Beating in line

Whishing I could hear yours

But it's just mine

Reviews

[Mayank]

the first line is straight 'I cannot believe Everything I feel' there are things in love that are just unbelievable.

[Patricia]

Alot is very unbeliebable and thank you!

[studentinthecafe]

Sorry been offline for a while. This was really good! I liked the way you let this one unfold. It was poetic, yet it told a story. Often times I think we are so wrapped up in the emotion that we forget to tell a story a long with it. Excellent piece!

[Patricia]

No problem, thank you!

[SyberRose]

Love the perspective of the inner voice
well conceived...SyberRose

[Patricia]

Thank you very much!

[Saddam]

Sometimes it is hard too tell our grief and time is change full.
Your art is fantastic and expressed well.

I need to hear
It will be okay
Your heart throbs, too
And that you'll stay

[Patricia]

I am very happy you can enjoy this, thank you!

[Misery]

It is difficult to express the hollowness of desire, but you have done a fine job in this poem.

[Patricia]

Thank you very much!

[Misery]

You are welcome.