How

How

A Poem by Patricia
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There are way to many questions you will never get an answer to.

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I thought so much about you 
And never thought you would too 
What was I suppposed to do?

Questions without a reply
A not answerable why
I am so scared to rely
How am I supposed to I get by?

As I do know now
I tried to avow
I am asking how

© 2015 Patricia


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A very cleverly written piece Patricia. Short which I like but conveys the feelings you have and the questions you have, Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
There is somewhat a sad tone to the poem for questions this speaker has that will never be answered. Well, not necessarily a sad tone but one that keeps me, the reader, thinking. Very nice :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you! It should sound sad, because it is. So many thing we will never know and what the person .. read more
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jb
Nice poem ....great gob!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
jb

10 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
beautiful.......
we do have a question or two to spare, after the moment has passed to keep us amused.........sometimes a whole lot of them......
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. 7th line from the top: the second "I" doesn't seem to fit. just my opinion and i might be wrong.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I understand what you mean I myself thought about taking it out, but somehow it felt righ.. read more
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Rm
Great poem with excellent expression:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
great poem :) u were able to talk about questions that we all sometimes ask ourselves and never know the answer :) great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)!
Justin

10 Years Ago

your welcome, keep it up :)

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Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..