Never asking

Are we deathless?

Everlasting?

Breathless!

Not contrasting.

Never asking.

Reviews

[Robert]

Short but the words are chosen so wisely for this piece. It is thought provoking and makes you think and wonder. Well written Patricia.

[Patricia]

Thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I enjoyed your lines they are small & beautiful with all meaning in them. Nice Work!

[Patricia]

Thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're welcome my friend!

[guy drori]

Very short and well pinned. Touches the philosophical question of our existence and existence in general. Is death necessarily none-existence? Do we live forever somehow? Glad I read this.

[Patricia]

Thank you for your interesting thought to that!

[Stephen]

Interesting poem. I like it. thanks for sharing

[Patricia]

Thank you for reading and commenting