You do

This is my first love poem ever I think..

Who needs sun

For the first time

I don't want to run

Who needs light

A glance in your eyes

I don't want to fight

Who needs air

I'd lose it anyways

I don't want the spare

For the first time

One does not worsen

You do make me

A better person

Reviews

[Angad Waraich]

Sweet and simple , a good write.

-Angad

[Patricia]

Thank you for that nice comment

[hanir]

A very clever piece. Nicely written. 😊

[Patricia]

Thank you my dear

[hanir]

You're welcome.
Would love to read more of your works.. 😊
Keep writing.

[Patricia]

How sweet of you! I definitely will

[Misery]

The first one is the unforgettable one.

[Patricia]

Thank you, I am happy that you like it

[Misery]

You are welcome, dear poet.

[Robert]

Patricia a good rhyming poem from the heart I believe. I am pleased that you took a step forward and wrote a love poem. I like the last line "you do make me a better person" whomever can make you a better person in life is a good person themselves.

[Patricia]

Yes it is and thank you for your lovely comment