If I told you

If I told you

A Poem by Patricia
"

Maybe sometime, maybe never

"
You would try to comfort me 
I know you, you would
This time I don't need to be loved
But I need to be understood

If we had this conversation
And I would try to explain
My words, my life, my thoughts, my heart
And you would end in pain

Your heart would break
My voice would shake
I know for sure
There is no cure

Not in my life 
I could tell you
Because if you'd tell me
I would break too

© 2015 Patricia


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You would try to comfort me
I know you, you would
This time I don't need to be loved
But I need to be understood
Love these lines
We really need to be understood more than to be loved sometimes.
Touching piece ☺

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia

9 Years Ago

Thank you alot! Its really sad sometimes when you are loved but not understood
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Years Ago

Yes indeed. I know this feeling only too well.
I love the title, it captures the readers attention. The poem is also very intriguing as nobody wants to hurt another.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you alot dear reader!
"but this time, i don't need to be loved but i need to be understood" love it! beautifully written piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
It is an allusion to the quote of george orwell! " Perhaps one did not w.. read more

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Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..