what

what i would give

tonight to walk

down the street

with a broken heart.

what the moon would give

for some sunlight 

to bounce back

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem . Well penned Paul.

[Elizabeth]

Heartbreak at midnight can be delicious... just like this piece. Bravo :)

[New Dawn]

Beautifully written - to wish for a broken heart because that means you have loved and been loved, cleverly portrayed - so much conveyed with so little.

[MOON]

Poignant write thought provoking . Lovely.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

You have skilfuly juxtaposed two seemingly opposing emotions together in the harmony of what it means to be human. Well done Paul!

Vincent

[Wondering Mind]

and then some

[Ed Hart]

in both cases what would be given is already at hand

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Loved it :)

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. oh ... this is that gem of a poem that sparkles like a star on a black night, coach ... you wrote my broken heart out ... stunning poetry ...