there

there's a madness 

in me.

wave after wave.

sea after sea.

there's a madness in me.

Reviews

[Emily B]

i am finding that there are not enough waves in the sea to drown the madness in me

[Elizabeth]

aaah, yes. In me too, I suppose. I always find such comfort in your words. Your madness is a thing of beauty.

[Dhaye]

Nice quatrain. There's always madness in life especially if it is chaotic. Problems make our sea of life wavy.

Good job!

[asdarkeyesclose]

'wave after wave.'





...well I keep taking the tablets but it doesn't go away! I like all that lateral thinking. fantastic.

[Ed Hart]

you're in good company......

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:: me too, coach... it just won't go away... and sometimes i think i don't want it to go away either... maybe those waves are the only proof of life in me... :: thank you for this spectacular piece of poetry...

[paul]

it's not the waves so much as the seas..

[.]

:: hmmm... you're right... the seas speak more...

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think we all have that tide within us....trick is to try to control it