buildings

I wade into madness

like a person in the sea.

i'm sharp on the street

the buildings got nothing

on me.

words are my ally

against the night.

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

There are those of us who also "wade into madness"; we, however, bring the sea with us.
Here's to buildings appearing dull compared to you and friendly words that continue to pierce the darkness!
A huge amount of commentary packed into such a short broadcast.
Amazing, Paul!

[Alisa Js]

Aloha Paul,

Thank you for stopping by and for your comments. I look forward to reading more of them soon,

This one is quite well written. Nice imagery and emotional content.

alisa ;-)

[Elizabeth]

I quite understand wading into madness, myself. Pitch perfect as always.

[LauraraMonique]

Loved this. You're good at writing. I've checked out a lot of your work.

[asdarkeyesclose]

always something insightful and of note on your pages. i love the visual quality of your work, the metaphors crisp. fantastic.

[Tricia Pattinson]

I found your words inspiring and comforting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so much said in so few words....and yes, words are powerful and a good ally to have...
we are well equipped to wade into the madness.

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:: wow... that's absolutely stunning poetry, coach... sorry i wasn't here sooner... i love the second stanza especially... you are really sharp... and words are your devotees... :)

[paul]

Thank you Serah ;)

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:: you're very welcome, coach... :P