infin

cities in the night

stars in the sky

infinity

and me

waiting to die.

Reviews

[Belle]

The diction,
The irony,
Ah--your every word feels so good on the tongue and in the mind.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but infinity will go on forever, as will the soul of who we are--long after we are physically gone...maybe we will become one of those stars. Like the brevity here.

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pssst...just saying, infinity's been waiting an awfully long time. Patient, don't ya think?

[Ed Hart]

hopefully somewhere in between you get a chance to live, with a cherry on top

[paul]

sometimes i escape to manhattan and wander, studying gardens and parks and skylines.
traverse the brooklyn bridge, drinking fine wine from a snapple bottle. sometimes ..
Thanks Ed for your always poignant comments.

[nazia]

Don't be so clueless.. waiting to die.. I would rather love this life...
I liked the expression in your work :)

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~~ and me too... ~~ sometimes... life just feels so exacting...

~~ ravishing poetry, coach... ~~ you write the history of the universe in just a few words...

[paul]

Thank you Serah. i can always count on you
and your words .

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~~ my privilege, coach... always... ad infinitum... :P