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all these madnesses lined up

from here

to hell

conspiratorial stars

cursed winds

treacherous tides

a grain of sand

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Simple and straight to the point. Good write

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. "madnesses" are something that only you could have written about ... lined up ... whoa ! ... indeed lined up ... but of course from here to hell ... ah, such depth ... and those tides ... ah, they smudge it all ... and that last grain of sand ... is who i am ... but i know ... only because you wrote so ... brilliant work, coach ...

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. revisiting to find that you're in the know about celestial conspiracies ... how could you be? ... cursed winds ... and then treacherous tides ... you speak like a creator ... the best ... and you create it all ... with a grain of sand ... your brilliance is so astounding ... it's like no debris of no soul ever existed ... amazing this is and amazed i am ...

[Martina]

simple - elaborate more and we have a golden poem here!

[emmah]

blown away
across unexpected bliss,
painted in disbelief,
diamonds in black crevices.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

I would simply call this "madness" you have captured well this image.....great write Paul...your talent shows...thanks for sharing!

[Emily B]

all and then nothing . . . it takes such a small space of time to travel from the universe down to the grain of sand

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. indeed! ... yet a defining one ... sometimes i think that insanity was just someone's figment of imagination ...