wind rhymes 1

open the back door

there's a world to explore

the world's an open door.

everything it seems

impossible as dreams

everything dreams.

waves upon the shore

it's madness i adore

madness and waves

Reviews

[emmah]

- just read it out to serah over the phone - and she says - you're evolving into an even more spectacular poet than you were -
- and here's what i think -

waves roar in glory
and sometimes,
simmer in peace.

waves and peace -
never-ending.

the simplicity of your expression coupled with the complexity of the emotion - its an extraordinary combination - i felt immersed - step by step - as once again, i was drawn into the exquisiteness of these images!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oh how luringly alluring~ beautiful composition~
waves and madness~ what gorgeous poetic undulations drawn between the two~

[Brad]

this was like a cold winter breeze in the naked morning...bravo

[Robin]

conceptual art

[...]

. stunning ... this is a stunning stunner's delight ... there's magic in simplicity ... there's magic in open doors ... there's magic in the impossibility of dreams ... there's magic in madness ... and the waves ... well they're just the waves that take one ashore ... emms is right ... one can only soak in these words and remain immersed ... an enthralling journey, paul ...