titles, titles, titles...

still air conspiring

to be wind

conspiring like the nighttime

to eliminate the day

conspiring like the nighttime

when the wind is away

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

I love this. I love the clean, crisp images and the way it says just enough without overstaying its welcome. It's just one, perfect thought.

[emmah]

the sky is sullen
and the stars all quiet -
a new wind
was just born
and a new day
already on its way.

cycles and circles.

[Crinkle°]

I love Sera's review! and your poem, of course.

[alan peter kelly]

well balanced write...loved the ending where the beginning began....an easy read...read it three times until the birds flew away with my mind ;)

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. oh ... i think the wind has no wind of these lovely pearls of wind poems that you find in the oyster of your heart ... else ... it would start writing poems to thank you ...

[Angel Bird]

My title suggestion here would be: dead calm

This write provokes quite some dark feelings, but nonetheless longing for wind and for the sun...
Well done.