the river

the river is trying

to say something

we'll never understand.

and there's really only two dimensions:

in and out

Reviews

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. this is a nuclear weapon ... every word and every line destroys myths ... indeed, there are only two dimensions ... what a compelling insight ... a perfect image and a perfect derivative ... how you infer and how you express ... are lessons in life ... and of course ... poetry ... startled by this one, coach ...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

and that's the way it flows~

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the every flowing river~hum-
everytime i read this i find myself
interpretive it in different ways...
a excellent poem-conceptualized -
at least to some degree-(i know-just my opinion?)
really-very ingenious!!!

[Robin]

sink or swim ~

[Ed Hart]

you betcha

[Lilly Negoi]

this one is exceptional!!! not always do we have too many options in life...:) 100/100