buildings

the buildings at night

smile insanely

at the star light

Reviews

[...]

Perhaps, they are the most grounded - static by design - with nothing to compel them from their state of inertia. You've etched an "insanely" brilliant definition of insanity. To smile at "star light" in an empty universe couldn't be anything but symptomatic of insanity, albeit an insanity that protests the death of sanity. These words fill my mind.

[Elizabeth]

Maybe they know something we don't.

[Siddhartha]

Nothing less than what I always expect from you!

[piggy]

yes, those little windows lite up at night could be smiles.

very clever, i never looked at them that way but from now on, i must.
and futhermore, i wonder what goes on in those little boxes of light?
you are a box of light yourself Paul

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

:)..the paul magic..

[Kerry O'Connor]

You see with the poet's eye - clear and untrammelled by man's dusty ways.

[OT]

as always you pack so much into so few lines!! you see what we all miss! the life in buildings - what a thought!!

[Shellie]

The shortness of it, and the simplicity of it is wonderful. Thats some observation to make.

[Wondering Mind]

That thin line again!!!
Your writing genius is much admired, my friend.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Pondering...I don't get it, so that means I do.

Excellent and thoughtful. I love your work.