infinity III

at night the sky

at sky the night infinity fights

a lonely fight

infinity fights a lonely fight.

at sky the night

at night the sky

infinity cries

a lonely cry

infinity cries

Reviews

[Dani]

what gets me is the simplicity of your poetry. what takes me 50 words to craft you can spit out in 5, so that's 45 words of complete s**t on my part, and 5 words of profound bad a*s on yours.

or in this case, 33 words of "I can kick Dani's poetry in the face any day."

[Ms. Gruye]

I like how the thought process turns itself inside out here, and then chews leisurely on its own tail. Quite the mind trip. the night, the sky, infinity all alone and crying. Vey finite and tightly conveyed with so little words. viva la

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

...and the night goes on forever, in someone's heart.
Nice, thoughtful piece. Thank you!

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this just could go infinitely... :)

[Alicante lullaby]

......i'm speechless....wonderful

[Ruth]

And do we ever hear it? I wonder! I have enjoyed this series of "Infinity".....unique :) xx

[Mary]

all three

[Mary]

beautiful

[Robin]

all it wants is acceptance