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I'm alone

like the sun

alone like the number

one

alone and the end

has just begun

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

I see you swinging on a tire swing... alone. Like the number one. This is signature "Paul". Like a gunshot- your words ring out and tear the silence apart.

[Robin]

on the edge of Zen ...

[Brittany]

There's a mystery here that I like very much...the end has just begun.

[Dani]

interesting.
reminds me very much of this:

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[Ed Hart]

the sun gives us light and life, the number one is all there ever was, it is only the end of the beginning...next

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem, a lot of meaning and talented writing packed into a few lines.

[Wondering Mind]

who was it that sand we are all alone in this together?
Brilliant write , as ever.

[...]

. dear coach ... this is an absolutely exquisite piece of poetry ... i'm alone too ... but it's because of incredibly gifted poets like you that there is sunshine in my universe of verse ... and i don't feel alone ... it's nice to be alone together ... :) ...