No Feeling

Oh, to live in a world with no feeling.

I want to eradicate

the pain in my heart 

and strip my mind clean

like the rinds of an orange

I want no feeling,

to see the word

through eyes unadulterated

to presume with no misjudgment 

I want to burn my anger

and drown my fear;

strangle my happiness

and hang my hope

Because perhaps these emotions

act as anchors

drowning us at sea

 

Reviews

[Sue Hart]

I like the assimilation you've done here. Dramatically put with a lot of thought behind it.

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That was deep and I gather it all :) I seen many moment behind a cloudy sky , I looked for the purpose , but was not among my eye, I wish to escape the sounding lights , the battles within, But I awake to a new dream a new beginning where life is more than sane:)