when i walk with you

a poem talking about being in love .

When i walk with you i am the most happiest person in the world i fell so great when you are by my side , you are the world to me and you are the best guy in the world, i fell so great when i walk with you.

Reviews

[kayla]

its so short hunny child(: i love you bestie. good job though(:

[Daydreamer54]

This was cute, i would try putting everything in the center though, so it'll look more like a poem. Also as Coyote poetry said, Capitilize ur "I"s. But don't worry, i sometimes forget to do that6 too. :P

[Coyote Poetry]

Break the lines up and cap the I''s and this poem will be perfect. Emotion and love are in your words. Always put yourself in the reader position. Make it easy to read. You have talent. Keep writing your beautiful poems.
Coyote

[Emmanuel Rosado]

sound like someone in love but let me get things to the point it good it awsome i know the feeling 2 but very good like how u put the person as ur everything