The Oblivious

Be wary of that which may be your undoing

You foolish vermin. That fester and wallow in their own filth and pestilence. Oblivious to the malicious entities that surround them. You fornicate and procreate and hold communion with these vile, sadistic and malevolent creatures. They fill you with their venom as a serpentine evil would sink his razor fangs into its prey. For though you feel nothing now in the present time, youll begin to grow weary and sickly. Twitching violently like the prey as it slowly feels the venomous tar grip its violently heaving heart. Pulsating slower and slower, weakening with every pump. Agitating less and less the prey does. Until the toxic venom has utterly consumed the whole body. Then so still the prey is. Its stagnant posture as its macabre essence is now consumed by the insidious snake. For now the serpent grows mightier in the plethora of the innocent sustenance. For a few may be wary to the occurrences of this plain of existence.

Reviews

[Darkimmortal]

I really love the wording that you chose for this, it really paints a vivid image in my mind. Even though this is really short, you have managed to create so many dynamics in only a few words. I could not help as if i was a small and worthless vermin, and that I am being told how I am to die and frankly I am quite disturbed by that aspect. So if that was what you were going for, Bravo. :) I look forward to reading more of your work.