heart flow

a piece about a feeling i felt.....today

your subtle words turn me into a sticky mess of soothing sap
giggle
giggle
a will 'o ' oh oh
was it wisp?
tsk
tsk

in eyes of delicate stairways carved in crystal
i shuffle faintly
in ninja steps
pitter patter
wsk
wsk

cupped your smooth jawline of soft warm fire
feather kisses

soft lustful nibble
nabble

Reviews

[R. L. Ambar]

...feather kisses....i love that, they seem even more amazing.

#_#

Rocher

[TamiViolet]

This piece has an innocent appeal, Periac. Words transform to sound smoothly...elegantly...

'eyes of delicate stairways carved in crystal'...striking beautiful line!

So softly you bring your verse to life as I envision a couple kissing by a warm, lucious fire...

[Adela Muresan]

The sensuality of the poem isn't reduced by the repetitions that give it a little childish character, by making it seem like some sort of game.

A.M.

[Seriana]

Sweet, Periac. I like this. I don't think I've seen this side of you before. It's rather nice! I like this line....
"in eyes of delicate stairways carved in crystal "
I can imagine the stairway, too. Nicely done my friend. :)