gift

a little sumtin sumptin that kinda rhymes

she eyes these stars

those glittering fireflies

diamonds in God's jar

grazing in the evening sky

 

she 's compromised in a damp raven's veil

reflected beneath an angel's sneeze

this caratid

oh holy grail

in a misty pose on hailing knees

 

a peek

a gaze

from my hollowed out caves

behind brush and such and trees that sway

chilled by autumn's cool voice

I watch her to rejoice

and draw with ash on the walls of gray

 

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

P.......I am paused...might I breath in the words of your creation. This is superb. Seriously, I feel like I need to bow to the master!!! Where have you been hiding your talent? Sigh...you could win a million hearts by your mere words alone. Lovely, lovely!

[This Page Does Not Exis..]

This is so tranquil and soft. Periac, this is so beautiful, like all your writing. I love how you worship the object of your affection...in every piece.

[Sound]

Very eloquent and soothing in a way. I like the way this piece flows, much like autumn's "voice" as you said. Great job.