Congratulations are in Order

Well

You won

 

You convinced a hesitant heart to fall

Was it worth it?

 

Do you feel accomplished…worth something to yourself

You really had me going

 

Your words are a farce

A fallacy

 

I cannot fathom I never took notice

 

You have conjured up an image

A character to step inside

A hiding place for your lies

 

Dare I give you applause

You deserve it

 

For you are a champion of deceit

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Unfortunately, there are many of these champions, and all too often we are tangled up with them before we know it. The stronger hearts arise with greater appreciation for those who are capable of authenticity and real love. Your wisdom comes through in your writing, as does your pain, and strength.

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

F**k you are me! I love your power punches-awsome!

[Persephone]

Hahaha Thanks!

[C.A. Lucas]

Wonderful vocabulary, wonderful flow... this poem is really great. I could feel your emotions pouring out. Gloriously written

[Persephone]

Thank you so much for reading!

[MR.RANDLE]

Whoa...this sound like a betrayal letter..and i can feel the words and i didnt doit,lol...great poem really..

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[Crazy Cat Man]

seems like the bad guys always win. :P the bad people who deceive us always win and they get what they want which is frustrating. I love this pure sarcastic tongue in cheek piece. :)

[Persephone]

Thanks reviewer!! :)

[nigrum homonculus]

very good. the honesty and irony in the end is just epic. i really enjoyed this. well done!

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Crisp, clear, concise. Not a meaning hidden, not a word minced. An excellent piece.

[Persephone]

Thank you for reading and the thoughts!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest and direct thoughts in the poem. Sometime good to thank people for teaching us what a liar can do. No weakness in the poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Persephone]

Thank you Coyote!