Wrong Collector

You have carefully acquired
a collection
of my wrongs

I am unprepared
To witness this adornment
Of delicately compiled defects

I was too distracted
Lost in my own collection
Of your rights

Reviews

[Ai Lun]

I love your name! (That's what brought me to your profile). Now that I've said that, this poem is great! very well penned! It's simple but delivers your personal message very clearly :)

[Persephone]

Thank you so much :)

[Ai Lun]

You're welcome!

[James William Dyer]

Interesting, made me wonder what a wrong would look like if it took corporeal form...I pictured the wrongs as bent coat hangers......there's an idea, to describe what the wrongs look like that he's collecting. Nice work

[Persephone]

What an interesting thought- thank you for reading :)

[Abd-afeez]

Oh! i was reading it and smiling but in the end you kept the smile away. the poem powerfully embed the images of men's cons, how they appear as friends but in the end steal all our happiness away. thanks for sharing this wonderful write.

[Persephone]

Thank you for reading :)

[Abd-afeez]

You are welcome

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Those who use our faults against us have something to hide.

[Persephone]

Very true` thanks for reading :)

[Steven Cash]

Interesting

[Persephone]

Thanks!

[Steven Cash]

np