Burning

This flame keeps burning

From the inside out

 

It burns when you’re here

It’s worse when you’re not

 

It never stops….

 

I can’t keep playing with fire

Reviews

[Havoc08]

Hmm...this intrigues me in the internal love realm. I have felt this before. When desire takes over, and nothing else matters. Which in the end goes all wrong hence getting burned if you keep playing with fire. Very nicely done, so deep and full of meaning and undisclosed thoughts. I love it!

[Persephone]

Thank you :)

[Rob Santana]

Interesting, I for one enjoy playing with fire. But I know one day I will get burned. Good write.

[B-poet]

Interesting and intriguing. Playing with fire is always a negative experience. Being burned comes with the territory. Very well written. Nice job. :)

[Persephone]

Thank you :)

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Great write, very emotional :)

[Persephone]

Thank you :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good one. I like

[Persephone]

Thanks :)