Broken heart

baciclly a poem about a broken heart

there are some people with broken hearts

like this person

you love someone

they love you back

you end up together

nothing will separate you untill the day you die

you hold each other

you never let go

untill you get a phone call

your love is with someone else

you cry

you hurt

you begin to hurt yourself

your heart is broken

then you decide to leave this world

goodbye

Author's Note

it just came to me................i know is sux

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

okay i just had to leave another comment for this!!! it makes me sooo sad....especially right now... i like these last lines:

you begin to hurt yourself
your heart is broken
then you decide to leave this world
goodbye

i loved the ending! heart aches suck, and to really get this poem, you have to go through it...

[ac31595]

dude it dont suck you should seriously write way more i cant be this deep i couldnt even think of this stuff sorry jerry lol NICE i like it alot and dude i know how you feel i like someone but its not the same person if anyone told you lol and they dont like me back so its about the same feeling

[Alyssa!!!]

omg...*sniffles* I LOVE YOU JERRY!!!!

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

hey!!! i liked this alot!!! it describes how i have felt and how my friend has....it's nice!!!
and remember that you write for yourself, so if someone doesn't like it then okay!! no one has to like what you write except for you, but i liked this anyways!! i can't see why someone wouldn't!!!

nice!

~may

[Jerry]

sweet!!!