THE SPIRIT OF THE SUN

A fancy look at the sun and the influence it may have on our lives.

The sun reached out its tentacle,
It explored down all my years,
It warmed my heart last winter,
It dried up all my tears.

It wandered down my heartaches,
It kissed this heart of mine,
It touched my soul at morning,
And taught me how to shine.

And when the winter's cold hoar
Reaches out for you and me,
And we are guided onwards,
It'll teach us how to see.

I'll see your face, my darling,
When age has scribbled deep,
The sun will shine upon you
As your life fades into sleep.

And we will go together,
Two souls entwined as one,
Two shadows guided onwards
By the Spirit of the Sun

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

I love the theme the sun as your 'north star' through your life. I especially like the end, and hope for this for my husband and me. A very beautiful, sweet expression that I resonate with completely. Romantic, but also true.

[Peter Rogerson]

I'm a romantic old fool myself and can't bear the idea of parting from my wonderful wife.

[Marianne Rose]

My husband has nine lives like a cat, and used them up already- you'd think I could get used to losing him. But instead, each time I get more attached. Then he's afraid of losing me- nightmares all the time - he can't find me, etc. 34 years is a long time to be together through the roller coaster and still be hanging on. I totally get what you're feeling and saying, and cherish every moment- even the uncomfortable ones. If you haven't read my poem Lenny- that's who my husband is to me- a hero.

[Peter Rogerson]

I will read it now. Thanks for sharing your experiences.

[mizukawaii2]

That is exactly the feeling that the sun always give to me. A never-ending warmth though the seasons changed, yet the memories remains..

[Peter Rogerson]

Thanks for your very warming comment.