Blown Away

A haiku on having hope in love.

Love blew me away.

I lay there trampled upon, till

It picked me up again.

Author's Note

It is my first haiku. Feedback of any sort is very much welcome!

Reviews

[Sherlock]

cute !!!! .... i read it to some of my friends ...
we all loved it !!!
great work !

[Phalguni Rao]

that is so sweet! thank you :)

[Renée]

Lovely work ! ( :
.....

[Phalguni Rao]

thank you!

[Renée]

your welcome ( :

[Acucena G.]

Its amazing , simple and beautifil. Nicely pen'd.

[Phalguni Rao]

thank you for your kind words :)

[LightforChrist]

So beautiful! I loved it! Great Job!

[Phalguni Rao]

thanks a lot! :D

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Your Haiku sort of ignites a little hope inside a broken heart, assures that it is never really over. It's sweet and romantic and i really enjoyed reading it:-):-):-D.

[Phalguni Rao]

That was the intention, glad you like it. Thanks! :D

[Akshat♥]

Really nice..it touched my heart :)
Awesome :)

Keep writing!!

[Phalguni Rao]

thanks! :D

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)