River Wide

River Wide

A Poem by pheasant

I'm off to the race
Out of this place
And into a new

I'll still be around
Still make a sound
And always be true

True as I fly
Wondering why
And how it may go

In a welcoming home
I won't be alone
So sharing I'll know

Peace be to you
As I move on through
This turning tide

I'll write you again
And still be your friend
On this river wide

© 2011 pheasant


Author's Note

pheasant
moving to southern California for a time

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Wonderful sing-song poem. Love the rhyme and normally I am not into the rhyming .. this goes well though. The title drew me to this poem. A good title and you are right... no matter how wide the river, true friendship never ends.. Good luck there in S.CA. where i hear it never rains.. I love rain i would have to go to Seattle often if i lived there lol

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice rhyme ~ good luck ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful sing-song poem. Love the rhyme and normally I am not into the rhyming .. this goes well though. The title drew me to this poem. A good title and you are right... no matter how wide the river, true friendship never ends.. Good luck there in S.CA. where i hear it never rains.. I love rain i would have to go to Seattle often if i lived there lol

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good luck in your new home :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice .... but my favorite in this one is the last paragraph which I find truly and absolutely fanta-bulous ..!!
I like this .

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is what i think about when I think about my future plans Im not planning on staying around my hometown for very long after I graduate high school. Very nice poem, I love reading things that apply to my life.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2011
Last Updated on March 3, 2011

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pheasant
pheasant

Santa Rosa, CA



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