Man-Kind

If we give up hope, then who will be there to change the day?

Teenagers and tanks
Tangle on the banks
While money mongers mingle
And possessions they jingle

In this dreary picture of a manly kind
  Should not we leave space for a revolving Mind?

What I can foresee
Within this mystery
Is that top notch sarges
Will yield their charges
As folks like you and me
Make free
Our minds and hearts...
And blessing starts
To be the new way...
To save this day

Author's Note

This was written after touching a poem here by Tate Morgan

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The Peacemaker are needed today. Sending young men and woman to learn death before celebrating life is a terrible deed. The poem is hopeful and beautiful. I like the photo. The words are true. "Blessed are the peacemakers." A excellent poem.
Coyote

[howlfjdks]

It is truly all about money.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this revision.. very good beginning verse.
Reminds me a little of the revolution in Egypt.
Wise words.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I have not read his poem was just going by to read ..It is wonderful that you get so much inspiration from other's poetry.I feel this is a poem of saving mankind before it is too late ...so the day may be saved. Nice poem and inspiration .

Chloe