Zones of Intent
A Poem by pheasant
We are what we think Or we think what we are We know how to blink But don't need to try hard
Our breath is so natural It moves on it's own And with focused intent This tool can be grown
And so it can be With the thoughts we think When using this tool We come to the brink
The brink of the known These seeds we have sewn... But with seeds planted now We give life a zone
A zone to the possible As yet to be shown Where the old impossible Becomes overblown
Overblown by the pattern The frequency... tone Which arranges the subtle Ether, mass... and clones
Clones our intents... Our mind's eye's scope And begins to shape futures... Are yours fueling hope?
© 2011 pheasant
Author's Note
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Do we really know what may be possible?
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Your poem flows so well. Your beginning verse brings the reader in ..
I once thought we knew but now , I don't think we really know what may be possible ... or what possibilities may have already been made possible, kept from us.
You make me think here .. wonderful poem to make a body ponder.
I really like this verse:
"We are what we think
Or we think what we are
We know how to blink
But don't need to try hard"
""We are what we think or we think what we are"... very true..
Using clones in the two different contexts adds much .
Chloe
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Added on February 23, 2011
Last Updated on March 3, 2011
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pheasantSanta Rosa, CA
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This is such a great outlet for so many... I'm here to share, make meaningful connections, and delve a little deeper into the creative flow. I know writing to be a tool and a gift, that can help us in.. more..
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