Call It A Truce

Richness abounds
And soothing sounds
Echo roundly throughout
This profoundly kind find

Living proof
Our blessed youth
Have light and hope
To broaden their scope

So long held coldness
Evaporates as boldness
Speaks as a drum
Shape-shifting a plum
Into life giving juice
And call it a truce

Author's Note

Written after visiting Chloe... Across the Universe's home page here.

Reviews

[Shiningwolf]

This is true "
Living proof
Our blessed youth
Have light and hope
To broaden their scope
"
The older kind must set good examples for the young to help make peace.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Happy you were inspired by my home page as this is what I wish everyone could do .. not just here on this site but everywhere.
I like the flow of your poem and the rhyme.. love this verse:

"So long held coldness
Evaporates as boldness
Speaks as a drum
Shape-shifting a plum
Into life giving juice
And call it a truce"

Making life giving juice from a plum .. and call it a truce.

Chloe

[Ladysue]

A very good and tight write...good image...love these lines..

Into life giving juice
And call it a truce

[howlfjdks]

Forgiveness is everything.