love... love love love

love... love love love
we do have here
up... up above
this new found sphere

deep... deep in thought
now me you've got
one... one more time
your light does shine

drift... drift into
this inner you
do... do reveal
that winner zeal

last... last but not
the very least
live... live on that
one merry feast

Author's Note

written after touching another work here, "The Law of Love" by Poetic Justice

Reviews

[Ladysue]

this is a delight to read..love does feed the spirit and make everything feel brand new...beautiful piece of work...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Love is what we need to keep us hopeful and alive in spirit. Thank you for the outstanding poem. A pleasure to read.
Coyote

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wonderful poem and added touch with the sign language pictures.
I don't know if i have read that poem of PJ's .. will look as it has really given you beautiful inspiration for this poem of love.. best word ever L-O-V-E...


Chloe

[Tommy]

I love it! It calls to the two for love found in a pair. It flows great, and the message is "Love," how can you beat that...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Rossen]

well done friend

[OT]

very nice!! it has a great rhyme scheme too! and what a great piece inspired this!

[Robin]

a feast that is to shared , to be given ~ love

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blessed that your inspiration came from my piece..

and deeper into the rabbit hole you dive...

loved it