Imagination

Imagination

A Poem by pheasant
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Written after touching a poem here, "Close Your Eyes-Dream " by Chloe... Across the Universe

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Imagination lives
Imagination gives
Us all a tool to deal
In molding minds that heal

A vision cast on inner scapes

Decisions passed through woven gates

 

Projected pools

Reflected tools

Containing codes

Ordaining modes

 

A vivid dream

A liquid stream

A feeling flow

Revealing glow

 

A collected collage

A selected montage

Cast into the ether

All hailed by the breather

 

© 2011 pheasant


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These words are full of hope...I want to breath out all my hopes and dreams...what a great idea for meditation.

Chloe is such an inspiration!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ouu, great rhyming.

well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This plays off the tongue so well; the flow the rhyme makes the rhythm sing. I love the message of let your Imagination flow…

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"A vivid dream
A liquid stream
A feeling flow
Revealing glow"
A amazing poem. The words were positive and hopeful. We need imagination and dreams to keep our hope alive. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a fun read! :D Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh, this is beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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sigh..just right...solid rhyme and meter..just makes this a pleasure to read..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem, is clean as a whistle
I really enjoyed the format, meter and speed~
and wise too,
She is such a inspiring talent and a beautiful soul

Top job, thumbs up!
Rossen

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good poem and very right on ... i am so glad we have imaginations - it would be awful not to . Very nice rhyme and flow.
And so glad to know my imagination inspired you to write this. :)

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imaginations unfold to make dreams come alive...cleverly done with a good flow...nice work..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 15, 2011
Last Updated on April 15, 2011

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pheasant
pheasant

Santa Rosa, CA



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