First Kiss

Doorway vanishing

Fleeting anticipation

Lips touching in time

Author's Note

A telephone collaboration with good friend Rossen.

Reviews

[Crayon]

So simple, and so very beautiful :D Well done Pheasant, this captures a perfect snapshot in time.

[Coyote Poetry]

Funny part of life is. Forget most things. But you don't forget the first kiss and first walk hand in hand walk with a love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I admire those who say so much in so few words.
Very poignant , ' lips touching in time'
beautiful.

[Kelly M.]

I liked it. Simplistic and sweet in a very pretty way! :)

[Tommy]

Sound of forever
The pitter patter of love
Two hearts beat as one

Inspiration this piece feels my mind...

Great Write You Two!
RLG,
Tommy

[.]

you two have merged your styles wonderfully..seamless and fluid

[Robin]

the scene captured

[Ladysue]

perfect indeed!!!

[Emily B]

oh, perfect!

[Fabric Pulse]

Real, vivid, sublime, interventional, right there.