Making More

Adding one more line
Lad set on the vine

Loosened as a light                              
Nestled in the night

Reaching out for inner peace
Leaching sights and songs cerise

Pushing past these olden schools
Passing out squeezed Golden Rules

Pulling for another clue
Bulling towards reviving new

New and fresh in mind and step
Being clear in keeping pep

Now it's known
How life is grown
To be resolved
On paths revolved

Revolved around an ancient core
Feeding, feeling, making more

Author's Note

Getting back into the flow...

Reviews

[.]

loved the flow - loved the rhythm...super writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A good way to look at life.
"New and fresh in mind and step
Being clear in keeping pep"
You create a good vision with strong words and very good artwork.
A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Silent Knight]

Good read and an awesome picture.

[Rossen]

On the positive track with power and eloquence
my favorite of yours, great penning ~ 100/100


Rossen

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Pushing past these olden schools
Passing out squeezed Golden Rules

Hell yeah... times change so must our ways of thinking.

[Ruth]

The build up in this poem is superb :) A dance into many paths and thoughts...feels naturally flowing too, great work xx

[OT]

you have a great natural rhyme to your words - the beat and flow is spot on here!! nice!