Winner Beginner

Another Evolvement

A lucid walk down trodden paths
Sifting softly the subtle laths
Holding up beyond the arcs
Stepping down within the darks

Chasing shadows cast in spaces
Charting out... renewing places
Landing on a solid line
Passing trains of thoughts behind

Collected classifications
Directed fortifications
Refueling fascinations
Retooling transformations

As might light on given nights
Shimmer through inner-scape flights
Seek out the winner beginner
Never needing... always seeding

Reviews

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the picture connects well to the poem..great rhythm and flow..super work

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the movement of the words. I had to read this poem a few times. No weakness in the poem. Just strong poetry that is a pleasure to read. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[NyanMeow]

I'm seeing this read request super late as I've been MIA for awhile. I love your rhyming skills! I especially like the stanza with all the "tion" words. Great job. :)

[Desert Dreamer]

Feels like an awakening, a rebirth, as if seeing the world through different eyes...the picture really adds to this feeling.

[Ruth]

Wow! Like infinite consciousness love! Superb! xx

[Emily B]

i love the flow

[Silent Knight]

I love the rhyming. Good flow too.

[Ladysue]

Chasing shadows cast in spaces
Charting out... renewing places
Landing on a solid line
Passing trains of thoughts behind

great ending..love the picture...this has bite and lit...excellently done...

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Very nice, Joseph. I like the affirmative feel of this work. Great rhyme and cadence here. Fave line is 'Charting out, renewing places',
Weel done, Amigo!